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Post by Hilarie Burton on May 28, 2006 15:28:34 GMT -5
Thanks so much!!! I'm still trying to figure out who it was who jumped in after Nathan...lol...I think I have my idea though.
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Post by naleylove4ever on May 28, 2006 18:06:16 GMT -5
Great! Can't wait to read it! BTW, I like your new banner.
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Post by Hilarie Burton on May 28, 2006 18:28:17 GMT -5
Thanks!!
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Post by Sophia Bush on Jun 2, 2006 13:53:03 GMT -5
i LOVE it......keep going
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Post by Hilarie Burton on Jun 2, 2006 17:06:05 GMT -5
Ok, well, here is more!!
Peyton was lying in her bed drawing. It was of Brooke, pointing to her door with the Fantasy Boy Draft picks on it. The words written across it were 'Not just any boy...My boy!'. Brooke had just stormed out of her room. She was thinking about how things got screwed up so badly last time with the whole Lucas/Brooke/Peyton love triange, and how they were now. She was disconnected from Brooke for a long time last time. It was horrible, and there was no was she was going to let that happen again. She HAD to fix this. She jumped out of her bed, and stormed down the steps. "I have to find her." She thought. She jumped in her car, and started driving. She had an idea where she might be. She figured she would be at the mall...Shopping her pain away...It was one of the things Brooke did best.
As she drove, memories flashed through her mind. They were of Brooke and Peyton, as little kids. The first one was when Peytons mom died. All she could think of was how Brooke was always there for her. "It's okay Peyton, I will always be here." A younger Brooke said while hugging Peyton in her room. Peyton was crying. Not sobbing hysterically, but she was crying rather badly. "How could she leave me?!" Peyton said through her tears. "Oh, PSawyer, I don't know." Brooke didn't really know what to say. At these words, though, Peyton looked at Brooke. This was the first time Brooke called her that. She liked it though. For a moment it even took her mind off of her mothers death. {Older Peyton now} Peyton smiled at this. It was the start of BDavis and PSawyer. She wasn't sure about Brooke, but Peyton looked when Brooke called her this. It gave her a sense of security....
The next memory was a funnier one. They were at the mall, shopping. The could only have been 9 or 10. Peyton was looking through the new cds. "Peyton, come oooooon!" Brooke groaned. "You've looked through there a million times! There is nothing good!" "God! All this stuff sucks! You know, I'm gonna get a record player!" "For what?! All your music is CDs!" Brooke said annoyed. "Well, all the good music is the old stuff, so I'm gonna get records and a record player!" Peyton said, quite excitedly. "Whatever....Can we please go to the make-up now?!" Brooke said anxiosly while grabbing Peyton's hand and dragging her to the next store over. "Why do you buy this stuff? Your parents won't let you wear it anyway!" Peyton said. "Well, because, you see that cute guys over there? Well, I read in my moms magazine that this color really turns guys on." Brooke explained, holding up a tube of red lipstick. Peyton rolled her eyes. Brooke got all these sayings like 'turns them on' and 'gets them hott for you' from her mom's magazines. Brooke read them constantly. Brooke payed for the lipstick and walked out of the store. She hurridly put it across her lips a blotted a few times. For being so young, Brooke new how to put her make-up on. "Look good?" Brooke said. "Oh yeah, great!" Peyton said, knowing there was only one right answer. Brooke walked about as sexy as she could past the boy. Peyton noticed he didn't even turn his head. Brooke obviously saw something else. "He looked at me! Did you see?!" "Ummm...Yeah!" Peyton lied through her teeth. {Older Peyton now} Peyton smiled at this memory....She wondered if Brooke ever knew the guy didn't look at her. "When we are on better terms I m gonna have to tell her." Peyton though, knowing Brooke would just laugh. A minute later, Peyton pulled into the parking lot and saw Brooke walking into the mall. Her instincts were right. She pulled up right next to her. "Hey, BDavis!"
What do you think? I will continue soon!
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Post by Sophia Bush on Jun 11, 2006 9:55:28 GMT -5
Keep going keep going
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Post by haley on Jun 11, 2006 12:15:43 GMT -5
Love it!
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Post by Sophia Bush on Jun 13, 2006 14:24:51 GMT -5
ya me too!
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Post by Hilarie Burton on Jun 13, 2006 14:55:23 GMT -5
Ok, heres more!!
"Nathan, umm...I'm gonna go see Rachel, is that ok? I'm not sure if her parents were here, and I don't want her to be alone and-" Haley was cut off by Nathan again. "Go." Nathan said simply. He understood, Haley was a really caring person, and he knew she had to go and see her. "Tell her I will be there soon." Lucas said. He wanted to stay and talk with Nathan for a minute. "Thanks..I won't be long." Haley said, giving Nathan a swift kiss and walking out the door. When Haley walked out of the room, Lucas stood up. "So, how do you feel? You were quite the renessaince man, jumping in, almost drowning." Lucas said. Nathan smiled. "Yeah, well, there was no way I was letting them just, drown. I was there....I couldn't just watch them die." Nathan explained. Lucas totally understood, as he would have done the same thing. "Yeah, I get it, Man. Oh...here." Lucas said, pulling something out of his jacket pocket. It was Nathans Classic Basketball game. Lucas figured he would need something to entertain him. So, when they first got to the hospital, Lucas ran over to the Scotts house to grab it for him. "Dude, first Haleys bracelet, not this, what else you got in that jacket? A rabbit?" Nathan said jokingly. "Yeah, your welcome." Lucas said, knowing Nathan was grateful.
Peyton jogged over to Brooke. "What do you want?!?!" Brooke spat at Peyton. "Why would you come after me!?" Brooke couldn't believe Peyton actually followed her. "Brooke-" Peyton started, but was cut off by her phone. "Hello. What?! Are they ok?! Ok, I will be right there!" Peyton was frantic. She turned away, to get back in her car. She forget Brooke was even there. "Peyton!! Whats up?!?!" Brooke asked, concerned. "Umm...Nathan, Rachel, and Cooper are in the hospital." Peyton said, starting her car. "What?! Why?!" Brooke said. She didn't care that she wasn't talking to Peyton. She needed to know. "Umm..I will explain what I know on the way. Get in." Peyton said, not thinking. Apparently Brooke wasn't thinking either, because she jumped right in the car. It would be easier just going to the hospital together. Peyton pulled out, and sped to the hospital.
Tell me what you think!! It wasn't the best, but I needed a filler.
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Post by Sophia Bush on Jun 14, 2006 9:09:58 GMT -5
very good
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Jeyton4evr
Tree Hill High Freshman
Every song ends, it doesnt mean you cant enjoy the music.
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Post by Jeyton4evr on Jun 23, 2006 12:01:16 GMT -5
I love it! More soon!
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Post by Haley on Jul 9, 2006 12:44:48 GMT -5
I can't wait to read more! Great job!
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Post by Hilarie Burton on Jul 9, 2006 22:10:18 GMT -5
Thanks! Here's more!!!
Haley was being quite cautious about going to Rachel's room. I mean, they didn't talk all that often, or even get along for that matter. But, it didn't matter. Haley had to go see her. "Hello? Rachel?" Haley said, opening the door a crack. She opened it a little more, to see a tear-stained faced girl sitting on her bed. "Rachel, what's wrong?" Haley said, rushing to Rachels bed. "Nothing, nothing. I'm fine." Rachel said, quickly trying to cover up. Rachel thought about Haley. She hadn't ever really talked to Haley. But, from what she heard, she was a pretty good friend. She felt like she had to tell someone about what had happened. She couldn't keep it inside any longer. "Umm..ok, then-" Haley started, backing away. She didn't want Rachel to get mad, so she figured she should just leave. "-I will catch up with you later." Haley finished, turning her back to walk out. "Haley, wait." Rachel said, getting up all the courage she had. "Yeah?" Haley said, surprised Rachel even said anything to her. "Can I tell you something. Like really private? I mean, can you keep a secret?" Rachel said, really nervous. "Umm...sure, I can. Whats up?" Haley said, walking back over to the bed. Here it goes, Rachel was about to spill her guts. Just then, a nurse walked in, turning her back to close the door, so she didn't notice Haley was sitting with Rachel. "Miss Gatina, we have some news concerning your pregnancy." The nurse finished, turning around to see Rachel--and Haley. Haley was shocked, dumbfounded. "Rachel's pregnant?!" Haley thought to herself, turning around to see Rachel, who had put her head down, not wanting to face Haley.
Yeah, I know, short. But, I'm lacking ideas!!! Just a little something until I get more ideas. Reviews!
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Post by Sophia Bush on Jul 10, 2006 8:41:00 GMT -5
i love it.....hmmm...so some one now knows Rachel is pregnant.....i wonder if Haley is gonna tell...i mean at least Nathan...i mean they are married..........LOVE it
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